Hallo wir schreiben morgen eine Englischarbeit und es könnte unter anderem die Frage dran kommen, wie wir über Werbung denken und ob wir uns von ihr angesprochen fühlen.
Deshalb bitte mal folgenden Text durchlesen. Grammatikfehler/oder wie könnte evtl. besser formuliert werden?
Danke schonmal
I think advertising is very important for me because without any advertising I wouldn't get informed about the things I'm interested for example make up, fashion and hairstyling and so on.
Also it influences my whole life.
It is present in buses, railway stations, supermarkets and so on.
Every day, when I watch TV or read newspaper, I can see many advertisements and I admit oftentimes I switch channels when there are advertisements on TV.
On the one hand advertising can be very boring; but on the other hand it also can be funny and entertaining.
If I notice that the product doesn't keep what the advertising promises, then I don't buy it any more.
That's why advertising is personally important for me.
Of course: advertising shall arouse attention, interest and desire.
Advertising is part of our life whether we want or not