Korrektur von Fehlern

    Hallo Leute..
    Ich hoffe ihr könnt/wollt mir helfen...


    Also: In diesen Sätzen ist überall mindéstens ein Fehler. Diese solen gefunden und korrigiert werden. Sind auch viele banale Fehler bei, aber ich schreibe trotzdem mal alle auf.


    1.But now their are so many women which are famous because they present talk-shows


    2. The old princip, women care for the children..., while the man are working and..


    3. in the 19th century can be found some reasond for..;they think more rational..


    4. an their stereotypes of men`s attitudes of work. for example washing dishes, caring..


    5. 24-houres-nurseries...; the first groups who fought for the womens rights were founded..


    6. once men have been defined by their superority; in the course of history there was no society with dominating women..or take dance lessons instead of play football


    7. that men had always the superior position in contrast to women. that is teached all over..


    8. another important point is the disposition. but the discrimination against women got less


    9.in complicated and high-respected jobs. being the provider they had to caree for their family...could be a little bit frightnened for men. For example, women doing techncal jobs.


    10. independent from the gender wheather a child...;only the parent`s attitude is important.


    11. ..want to be succesfull in their live..today also men make the household


    12. this was in the past only men`s work...also in´the politik even more females get high rangs


    13. this is result of the womens Lib movement..are not definde as exact as in the 1960s


    14. women flying an aircraft is an everday sight due to same capabilities like men.


    15. in the 1970s womens lin had achieved some of its goals. nowadays the education is not so much determined by the gender..to some extend you are right


    Danke schon mal im voraus

    1.But now there are so many women who are famous because they present talk-shows


    2. The old princip, women care for the children..., while the men are working and..


    3. in the 19th century there can be found some reasons for..;they think more rational..


    4. and their stereotypes of men's attitudes of work. for example washing dishes, carring..


    5. 24-hour-nurses...; the first group who fought for the women rights were founded.. (Aber der Satz macht keinen Sinn)


    6. once men have been defined by their superority (hier kenne ich zwei Wörter nicht); in the course of history there was no society with dominating women..or take dancing lessons instead of playing football


    7. that men had always the superior position in contrast to women. that is teached all over..


    8. another important point is the disposition. but the discrimination against women became less


    9.in complicated and high-respected jobs. being the provider they had to care for their family...could be a little bit frightened for men. For example, women doing technical jobs.


    10. independent from the gender wheter a child...;only the parents attitude is important.


    11. ..want to be succesfull in their life..today also men do the household


    12. this was in the past only men's work...also in the politic even more females get high rangs


    13. this is a result of the womens Lib movement (?) ..are not define as exact as in the 1960s


    14. women flying an aircraft is an everday sight due to same capabilities like men. wieder Wörter unbekannt)


    15. in the 1970s womens lin had achieved some of its goals. nowadays the education is not so much determined by the gender..to some extend you are right (Seh ich wieder keinen Sinn drin)


    Ich hab schnell drüber geguckt aber nicht alle Fehler finden können und hab auch unbekannte Wörter oder Ausdrücke nicht nachgeschlagen. Falls ich etwas falsch berichtigt habe, schlagt mir auf die Finger ^^

    Basierend auf holzwurms Korrektur:


    5. 24-hour nurses ...; the first group who fought for the women rights were founded.. (Aber der Satz macht keinen Sinn)



    Die andere Bindestrichschreibweise gibts im Englischen nicht.
    ich glaub auch, das heißt ehr all-day nursery


    Aber der rest ergibt so wirklich wenig Sinn. Was hat eine Ganztagstagestätte mit Frauenrechten zu tun?



    6. once men have been defined by their superiority; in the course of history there was no society with dominating women..or take dancing lessons instead of playing football


    Aber wurden Männer wirklich durch ihre Überlegenheit "definiert"? Find die Aussage bisschen merkwürdig


    12. this was in the past only men's work...also in the politics even more females get high rangs


    13. this is a result of the Women's Liberation Movement ..are not define as exact as in the 1960s


    15. in the 1970s women's liberation had achieved some of its goals. Nowadays the education is not so much determined by the gender..


    Für diese These muss auch auf den Kulturraum eingegangen werden. Aber das ist ein anderes Thema


    Was willst du mit "to some extend you are right" ausdrücken?



    hab auch nur ganz kurz drüber geschaut

    Bei dem Inhalt ist das auch nicht schlimm, wenn der nicht passt. Das sind Textausschnitte aus Arbeiten einer Klasse. Und da sollen die Fehler berichtigt werden. ;)
    Finde ich super, dass ihr euch damit befasst

    Wie gesagt: von dem Inhalt müsst ihr euch nicht täuschen lasse. Der tut nichts zur Sache.
    Wäre trotzdem cool, wenn auf dem letzten Drücker noch ein paar Antworten kommen würden. Also ich kann beim besten Willen keine weiteren erkennen.