Referat...suche Fehler

  • Hallo, ich habe nun mein Englisch Referat geschrieben und eine Folie vorbereitet....da wir einen Lehrer haben der sehr verkrampft nach Fehlern sucht hoffe wollte ich mal sichergehen dass sich keine Fehler in meiner folie befinden.
    Ich stelle sie mal hier rein und wer Fehler findet kann mir ja Bescheid geben.
    Es ist über "Eazy-E" (wir solten einen Rapper nehmen)


    Mfg, Vegas




    (ist jetzt nur der text):




    Eric Lynn Wright, better known as Eazy-E, was a famous Rapper. He and his Crew
    “NWA” recorded a song in which they criticized
    the racistic and violent policemen of Los Angeles.



    His Life


    • He was born the 7th September 1963 in Compton
    • Eazy-E never planned on rapping in any songs
    • After a crew called “NWA” heard his rap, they wanted Eazy-E being a member of their Crew
    • The five Crew-members recorded the protest song “F*** Tha Police” in 1988 in which they
    Criticized the racistic and violent policemen of Los Angeles
    • The LAPD (Los Angeles Police Department) was angry about the song, but the black people in Los Angeles loved it, because they were thinking the same
    • Later he left the crew and started a solo career
    • His first album , “Eazy-Duz-It”, sold 2,000,000 copies
    • He recorded 5 other albums
    • 1992 he was heavily criticized by many rap-fans for supporting the lawyer of Theodore Briseño that took part in the Rodney King beating
    • He died the 26th March 1995 because of AIDS



    Danke für alle antworten...

  • His Life


    • He was born the 7th September 1963 in Compton
    • Eazy-E never planned on rapping in any songs
    • After a crew called “NWA” heard his rap, they wanted Eazy-E to be a member of their Crew
    • The five Crew-members recorded the protest song “F*** Tha Police” in 1988 in which they
    Criticized the racistic and violent policemen of Los Angeles
    • The LAPD (Los Angeles Police Department) was angry about the song, but the black people in Los Angeles loved it, because they were thinking the same
    • Later he left the crew and started a solo career
    • His first album , “Eazy-Duz-It”, sold 2,000,000 copies
    • He recorded 5 other albums
    • 1992 he was heavily criticized by many rap-fans for supporting the lawyer of Theodore Briseño that took part in the Rodney King beating
    • He died the 26th March 1995 because of AIDS


    Sonst alles OK!