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    Time is money


    "Time is money" - this sentence explains the most important ambition nowadays.
    Most people work the whole day, they are planning their carriers and lives under heavy stress. They want to earn a lot of money to have a life inb luxury.
    Day by day they live with an enormous stress. Many managers are ill because they don't take care of their health. Egoism is very important nowadays. Many people think the whole day about how they can get a better job or to get more reputation.
    I hate this form of living. I think it is very important to get a good education and a good job. Of course everyone needs money for living. But in my opinion a luxury life is not important - the rich people aren't happier than the poor. A lot of rich people are unhappy because they can't know if their friends are really friends or do they only of the money?
    The rich often feel lonely. They drink often alcoholic and take drugs. They have sometimes no sense in their life.
    I think friendship and helping each other are the most important things. In my free time I help ??? dogs. It is a hard work - of course I earn no money - but a look in those dogs 'eyes gives me more than Millions.