comment - no kids why? (Bitte mal Korrektur lesen, danke!)

  • bitte mal folgenden Text korrigieren, bin leider nicht sehr gut in Englisch:


    I think, that it isn't possible to agree on children and career with each other in Germany.
    In many regions in Germany it isn't possible, to putting little children at a day-care center, because such supports are not possible. And when the support is possible, there are long waiting times.
    However, young couples who can't accommodate their children by grandparents or child minders, they are dependent on these facilities. In addition, the day-care centers are very expensive. When father or mother given up their job, they often cannot afford a support.
    So more and more couples decide to do without children.


    Danke für eure Hilfe

  • putting little children at ...
    richtig: to put children in a ...


    because such supports are not possible...
    besser: because no such facilities are available


    waiting times: korrekt: "waiting lists"


    can't accommodate their children by grandparents or child minders, they are dependent on these facilities. In addition, the ...
    besser: "who have no grandparents or nursery help to take care of their children"


    When father or mother given up their job, they often cannot afford a support.
    besser: If either of the parents is unemployed, .....