• Könntet ihr mal bitte nach fehlern schauen? ist wirklich wichtig. vielen dank.



    Some parents say to their children that they should reach something in their live and they should make something special out of their lives. But how would you define something special and what means to take responsibility for their own development?
    A lot of human beeings have different aims in their live and different ways to reach their aims. But at first I think it is important that every person take responsibility for theirself, for their live and for their own development. In my opinion the school help us to take responsibility for our development. We can learn a lot of new and interesting things, e.g. in mathmatics or other topics and so we can continue in our education. Sometimes people attend in courses at other school to develop theiself. Another help to take responsibility for teir own development are friends. They have a big influence and they can show us new sides of live and they can help us to take responsiblility for something. Consequently it is important to take responsibility for their own development, because people can be independent and they can make their own decisions. Besides they have the chance to make something special out of their lives. But a lot of human beeings have different ideas of the word special. For a lot of people “special” means to have a big car, a lot of money and a high possion in a job. For other people it is important to learn something new to continue their education. A good example is the figure Rita in “Educating Rita”. She is a normal women who has not a high quality of knowledge. She decided to go to an Open University and to learn more about the world of literature. Nobody believed that she would go there and to lern something. But this is her big aim and maybe it is “something special” in her live. Consequently it is important to have an aim in live e.g. to get a job or to get the abiture and to make something special out of it, because then we can say that we have reached something in our live.

  • We can learn a lot of new and interesting things, e.g. in mathmatics or other topics and so we can continue in our education.
    klingt irgenwie n bissel schmalzig ;)


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    abiture = a-level



    Ansonsten sehr gut gelungen :D