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  • ich weiß das ich villeicht nerve! aber ich brauch den korigierten text möglichst heute noch vor 18:30 uhr. also währe es wirklich sehr nett, wenn jemand mein referat überprüfen könnte! jetztschon mal ein großes dankeschön! :)
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    I am going to talk about the Eiffel tower. The Eiffel tower is the symbol of Paris and France. Gustav Eiffel built the tower, which stands by the Seine, a river. It is a Tourist-attraction with over 6million visitors yearly. The tower was built from 1887 to 1889, for the 100th anniversary of the France Revolution.. During that none worker died. The Eiffel tower should stand only for 20 years. On the top is an aerial with the first phone connections about the ocean. The tower is 300 meter high and over 10.000 tonnes heavy. It is made of steel. All 5 years the Tower must be stroked new with 50 tonnes of colour. The tower has 3 platforms for the public. On the first and second floor is a restaurant for hungry people. The restaurant on the second floor is one of the most popular restaurants in Paris. It means Jules Verne. Over 200 Million people have visited the Eiffel tower. First the people didn’t want to have the tower. If it is good weather, you can watch 70 kilometres far away. a visit doesn’t cost more than 11.50 euro. The Tower is open at 9:30 AM to Midnight daily during the summer.
    Now I am going to talk about Gustav Eiffel. Gustav Eiffel is born in 1832 and he died in 1923. He was involved by the construction of the Statue of Liberty. Many bridges were constructed by Gustav Eiffel.
    A visit of the Eiffel Tower is to be recommended, because it is wonderful.